Up High

[theweeney]

Hey... I'm new. What's up.







I’m so far up. I just realized. I’m so far from where my feet are planted. One misconstructed step and it’s all over. I keep growing. One day, I will tower over the crooked trees. The sun and the moon will orbit around my head. The stars will reflect in my shining eyes.

The never-ending darkness makes me dizzy. Up here, on my pedestal, I am all alone. Sometimes I miss those on the ground below. They concern themselves with petty things that I have no time for. I am discussing plans with God, up here between worlds.

Secretly, I want to be small again. I wish I were small again…

[asmolitor]

i think the concept is cool, but the second paragraph doesn't have the same flow that the first one does. the first one flows from sentence to sentence, but the second jumps around. like, from "petty thing" to "plans with God."