Anti-War Song

[Audiotech]

We Know You

We, we, we know you
Your daddy was a killer too
See the people down below
Suffer from your heavy blows
Who will judge?
You will see
Your cruelty from the silent seas
Lost in time
You've Lost your face
You turn away in disgrace
You walk alone
We know your face
Your daddy was a killer too

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[GREENatarisDAY]

gotta be critical here, that fuckin blew heres a real anti war song

Let it kill
share the air
because you’ll only be
left in the end
their dress code
is be dressed to kill
olive green apparel
laced with a touch of bloodshed

as they spill their lives into the sand, it spells out tyranny
the canvas is this land, and we coat it with our anger

One more life
you will take
you were given the cheapest
consent
And still safe at home
their dress code
is be dressed to die
no colors just images
of death showers from the dark sky

[Audiotech]

The idea for the song came from a slogan I heard being chanted by Palestinians:

Bush, Bush We Know You
Your Daddy Was a Killer Too
Sharon, Sharon You Will See
Palestine Will Be Free.

[GREENatarisDAY]

so you're using your inspiration to justify the bad piece of writing?

[BuriedAlive]

i think this is an anti-war song... sorry for the people who have already read it.

"1945"
I'm the shadow when you walk
I'm voice when you talk
you cant remove me
I'm here for permanant damnation
to feel the sorrow on your lips
to gaze at the silhouette of your face
as we lay in barricks without a name only called upon by a number
we are locked in the mainframe of the camp by these numbers
cant understand the torture we go through
the sun has taken its time to rest
the moon has begun his shift
and we gaze at the stars hoping, hoping we make it through
please dont let me down, dont let me drown
we've pushed for tomorrow, waking in this dead heap
knowing we are just starting another day of torture
when will it end?
we jump outta the plane forget the parachute
we will learn to fly, fly away from this hell on earth
as if life is just a short way of understanding who we are
we slave for hours, turn to nothing but skin and bones
can understand why we were chosen
as the day comes to its closure
we only hope we last till this is over
in our dreams we post this massacre
as the building go crashing down
we are free, no just another dream

[Audiotech]

If this song does not seem to match your apparent high standards, it would help to justify and explain what exactly "bad piece of writing" actually means? Otherwise you just come across as an arrogant smart arse.