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GREENatarisDAY
10/22/03, 08:46 PM
Now its time to walk away
as the night comes crashing down
pushing down the sun
that dissapears to somewhere
I havent been
its all just like you

and your letters stretched
across my face
with nails pierced into my eyes
so its suspended and on display
now lets wait
for hell to rise
and I can walk you home

so on the way there
I’ll throw some mud
right at your face
just to make you look better
and tie you to the gate

and I bet attention never
felt so bittersweet

The Nephilim2
10/22/03, 09:46 PM
die

GREENatarisDAY
10/22/03, 10:15 PM
thats cool dude but i was actually looking for some more elaborate critique

GREENatarisDAY
10/29/03, 07:41 PM
:(

Poor Excuse
10/30/03, 12:49 AM
very saves the dayish.. very very