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11/13/07, 07:48 PM
A new song the band is working on.Theres no title yet but I would like to receive criticisms an ideas for more lines.
" Its been three days
that i havnt left my room
im scared that im not ok
and im pretty sure im not
my eyes are weary
my stomach is weak
for these past few days
i havnt gotten much sleep
going on day four, im scared of whats outside my window
outside my bedroom door
its everything im running from
or somthing more
Ill eventualy get the guys to crawl from my blankets
and glance outside
because if i dont no one will know that i died
just three days ago"
-We would love your comments an opinions [Burn The Horizon]
" Its been three days
that i havnt left my room
im scared that im not ok
and im pretty sure im not
my eyes are weary
my stomach is weak
for these past few days
i havnt gotten much sleep
going on day four, im scared of whats outside my window
outside my bedroom door
its everything im running from
or somthing more
Ill eventualy get the guys to crawl from my blankets
and glance outside
because if i dont no one will know that i died
just three days ago"
-We would love your comments an opinions [Burn The Horizon]