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Killadelphia
11/14/07, 09:39 AM
It’s getting close to winter.
I can tell as the cold nibbles at my face
and by the way my bones ache in the morning.
They always say that someone is watching over you.
Well, if I had to make a guess, I’d say my watchman fell asleep at his desk
or he’s out doing something more enjoyable.

I’m here alone with old albums thinking all about you.
I’m here alone with old albums thinking all about you.

I’d do anything to make you smile.
However, I feel like I’ll never get the chance
We’re always so close, but never close enough.
I’d do anything to light up your eyes.
Sometimes I think you’d be better off
But you tell me you wouldn’t have it any other way.

I’m here alone with old albums thinking about you.
I’m here alone with old albums thinking about you.

When I dream, it is the only moment I get to see you now.
I’m getting tired of all of this black and white.
And when I dream, it is the only moment I get to see you now.
I’m getting tired of all of this black and white.

I need your color in my life.
I need your color in my life.
I need your color in my life.

...I didn't write anything for awhile, and I am trying to get back into it. I had an old username, but for certain reasons I cannot tell you. So, just judge it like you never read anything of mine.

GhostMachine
11/14/07, 10:30 AM
I'm not too sure about the whole piece. I really do like the third stanza though. It was put together wonderfully and reminds me of a girl I was once with. Not bad work though...keep it up.

Killadelphia
11/14/07, 10:32 AM
yeah I'm trying to get back into it. In the past everything was just blah. Constant nonsense about the same thing. I am going to try to explore different outlets now.

GhostMachine
11/14/07, 10:49 AM
That's cool. Finding outlets is a good thing...helps keep us sane.

Killadelphia
11/14/07, 10:55 AM
That's cool. Finding outlets is a good thing...helps keep us sane.

I think I used wrong word usage. I meant to say I think I am going to start writing about different things using different methods.

I mean thats the problem, well not a real problem, but a lead a somewhat boring, yet normal life.

GhostMachine
11/14/07, 10:57 AM
I think I used wrong word usage. I meant to say I think I am going to start writing about different things using different methods.

I mean thats the problem, well not a real problem, but a lead a somewhat boring, yet normal life.


Well, again...finding outlets is good. Be it different styles in your writing or different topics, it's an outlet for your expressions.