Simple Love Song

[.rawk.*.promo.]

I listened to my heart and it sang to me
Like a bird perched on my soul; it set me free
And like that bird, I longed to fly
My heart desired to touch the sky.

I lay on the grass thinking these thoughts
Wishing for someone in this world to love.
I wondered if love would find me at all
Or if I had somehow missed true love's call

Was love a concept to difficult to understand?
Was there anyone is this world who could help me stand?
Was love an experience that had somehow passed me by?
I looked to the heavens, but they won't answer me why.

But as I lay, the sun did fall, and the stars had begun to shine
And I decided to make a wish on each to find a love to call mine.

Then I saw one star brighter than the others
And it filled me with a reassuring warmth
It was within that moment, my smile did grow
And at the moment, I came to know

That love had not passed me by
Instead it was closer than I had realized.
In my heart, I felt its power
Lifting me up at this evening hour

And so I stood up, looking to the sky
And knowing in my heart, there'd be no room to cry.
And knowing I was free, I smiled and spread my wings
Took off into my night, listening to my heart sing.

Love, I await you, I sing your song
Please come to me. Don't be long.
My heart awaits you - I long for your joy
In your company, life I know I'll enjoy.

[Jumpoff]

Sort of cliche'd, and for whatever reason, just listening to this makes me think of a bad Christmas Poem...

I think you need to add more imagery and maybe a larger vocabulary would help.. Not every line needs to Rhyme, either.

[Beautifullyemo]

i think there's too much rhyming...I dunno, I kinda like it.

[.rawk.*.promo.]

Sort of cliche'd, and for whatever reason, just listening to this makes me think of a bad Christmas Poem...

I think you need to add more imagery and maybe a larger vocabulary would help.. Not every line needs to Rhyme, either.


I see hmm.. So you dont like it :/

[.rawk.*.promo.]

i think there's too much rhyming...I dunno, I kinda like it.

:D Thanks