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Alex Djaferis
10/24/03, 05:59 PM
my last effort :) comments plz!!!


Glow

Here is a glimpse of everything in me
A shattered heart graced by defeat
No wars won, it all came undone
Now I sit here waiting for the day to come

And I’ll fight with what’s left inside;
And everything within my mind but there’s
An empty soul searching for a place to hide
I cannot fight alone this time

I need you here with me
Right here by my side
Like a glowing splint
Radiate inside my mind

Here is a taste of everything in me
Bitter sweet and melancholy
I have lost the passion that once consumed
Every breath and every move I made

Like a battle you thought you’d won but lost
Like a drug you’d buy at any cost
I’ll be searching I’ll be waiting
Don’t care about the time this will be taking

I need you here with me
Right here by my side
Like the embers trying to retrace
The way to light the fire

MaybeOneDay
10/26/03, 03:08 PM
i really like it PD. excellent job man.

para ser libre
10/26/03, 03:57 PM
I don't have a
- this was good
or a
- this was bad


I just liked the song...the title is cool as well.

Blondiepunkgirl
10/27/03, 06:27 PM
i really liked this song. it has good emotion. your a good writer. keep up the good work.

Alex Djaferis
10/28/03, 05:12 AM
thanks people :)