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MaybeOneDay
10/25/03, 06:59 PM
this song i wrote is currently untitled...i dont care if anyone likes it or not, it was just for fun, but it needs a title. post your ideas. make it a good one or brandon (me) will hurt you. or...not..heh.



Verse 1
Cause we all know that love
Is a fatal car crash
Thats waiting to happen
It's times like these when I wish I was anyone but me
But don't you think it's odd
When I just might love you
More than you do
We're heading straight for a dream that only belongs to me

Pre-Chorus
And I can scream your name
We'll never feel the same
So tear me down and soak up all the love from my veins
And when I scream your name
I wish you would do the same
To lift me up and put some fuel on the flame
(Won't ever burn away -scream-)

Tonight...

Chorus
Walk away and hold your head up high
What if, all the city lights filled up the sky
Well I just want you to know
And I'll believe
And I just wish I could show you
Life with me
And if only I could show you life with me

Verse 2
And we all make a stop
Only to start up again
Whether you go left or right
Your heading for a sky thats only filled with flames
And we all turn the clocks
To the minute we first met
On the second of that hour
I took the train heading where I still don't know

Pre-Chorus
And I can scream your name
We'll never feel the same
So tear me down and soak up all the love from my veins
And when I scream your name
I wish you would do the same
To lift me up and put some fuel on the flame
(Won't ever burn away -scream-)

Tonight...

Chorus
Walk away and hold your head up high
What if, all the city lights filled up the sky
Well I just want you to know
And I'll believe
And I just wish I could show you
Life with me
And if only I could show you life with me

Bridge
And if only I could show you life with me
Every fan is spinning above our heads
And any light is burnt out of the sky
This is the song to show you who I am
Like a speck drawn on a blueprint plan

And if only I could show you life with me
Then I'd believe
I just wish I could show you life with me

Chorus
Walk away and hold your head up high
What if, all the city lights filled up the sky
Well I just want you to know
And I'll believe
And I just wish I could show you
Life with me
And if only I could show you life with me
Then I'd believe
And if only I could show you life with me
And if only I could show you life with me
And if only I could show you life with me
Milonater
10/25/03, 07:39 PM
*ahem*

- falling in halfsteps

lol. That probably does nothing for you..but for some reason, I felt like putting forth some sort of effort for you. Good luck.
steveo1022
10/25/03, 07:42 PM
life with me , its not very original or creative, but its a name and it gets the point across.

hope u get better suggestions then mine...

p.s. i love the first line of the song...Cause we all know that love
Is a fatal car crash
Thats waiting to happen

its very true
AlwaysPunkin45
10/25/03, 07:47 PM
I'm not good with that stuff..
Poor Excuse
10/25/03, 07:53 PM
why dont you name it: SHITTY SONG IN THE WRONG FORUM
Milonater
10/25/03, 07:55 PM
Someone help me name this one, my current idea is "why poor excuse is so bitter"

A little boy was born
on a rainy rainy day
snip snip snip
they cut his balls away.
MaybeOneDay
10/25/03, 07:58 PM
Originally posted by Poor Excuse
why dont you name it: SHITTY SONG IN THE WRONG FORUM

and why don't you go hand your balls to a butcher. but i highly doubt either of us are gonna take eachothers suggestions.


just wait till seth goes on AIM. you my friend...are outta here.
Poor Excuse
10/25/03, 07:58 PM
Originally posted by Milonater
Someone help me name this one, my current idea is "why poor excuse is so bitter"

A little boy was born
on a rainy rainy day
snip snip snip
they cut his balls away.

that actually made me laugh gj
Milonater
10/25/03, 08:02 PM
I have a way with words, here's another one.
I'm thinking "Poor excuses' favourite meal"

Take one scoop butter
and melt it in a glass
bend your daddy over
and pour it in his ass.
Poor Excuse
10/25/03, 08:03 PM
there are one too many canucks in this thread.. one of you please hang yourself immediately
Milonater
10/25/03, 08:04 PM
You're a hoser. Take off.
MaybeOneDay
10/25/03, 08:09 PM
Lets leave this one to the judges...

Current Standings:


Milonater - (1)

Poor Excuse - (-116)
AlwaysPunkin45
10/25/03, 08:11 PM
Poor Excuse, are your songs any better?:rolleyes:
Poor Excuse
10/25/03, 08:11 PM
Average americans dick - 8.5 inches

average canadians dick - 3.2 inches

this is a research study done by Dr William Scott..a professor at Princeton University
AlwaysPunkin45
10/25/03, 08:12 PM
Originally posted by Poor Excuse
Average americans dick - 8.5 inches

average canadians dick - 3.2 inches

this is a research study done by Dr William Scott..a professor at Princeton University Is there even a canadian in this thread???
MaybeOneDay
10/25/03, 08:13 PM
Average Americans IQ - 11

Average Canadians IQ - 97


This study was done by Brandon Allin, a Canadian, who still clearly has a larger penis than Poor Excuse, on the ap.net forums.
Milonater
10/25/03, 08:13 PM
Let's check some other statistics:

Number of members who think poor excuse is a ***: 100%.
Number of semen is poor excuses penis: 0, due to lack of testicles.
Average number of sexual partners poor excuse will have in his life: 9 (he's popular in the gorrila exhibit at the zoo).

Research provided by Poor Excuse's mother and rabbi who performed the testicular removal.
MaybeOneDay
10/25/03, 08:14 PM
...BTW, no offense to any of the americans. just poor exfag.
Poor Excuse
10/25/03, 08:16 PM
Originally posted by MaybeOneDay


This study was done by Brandon Allin, a Canadian, who still clearly has a larger penis than Poor Excuse, on the ap.net forums.

LOL YEA RIGHT CANUCK

youre some 16 year old teenybopper who BARELY FUCKING HIT PUBERTY..

do you even have hair on your balls?
Milonater
10/25/03, 08:16 PM
Even if he doesn't, he's one giant step ahead of you.
Poor Excuse
10/25/03, 08:18 PM
Originally posted by Milonater
Even if he doesn't, he's one giant step ahead of you.

yea you would know.. hop off his sack already bitch

fucking canucks
Milonater
10/25/03, 08:19 PM
Poor excuse: your mom called.
She said something like "tell my son to come back home, we've found a way to re-attach his testicles".
Poor Excuse
10/25/03, 08:23 PM
eh?
Milonater
10/25/03, 08:25 PM
I thought that might excite you. Happy re-testicled day.
Here's hoping they rot and kill you.
AlwaysPunkin45
10/25/03, 08:27 PM
Poor Excuse shave some hair off your mom's legs and put it on your pussy..
Milonater
10/25/03, 09:50 PM
That's not insulting, that's just wrong.