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MaybeOneDay
10/26/03, 06:35 AM
this song is untitled...so give me your comments, and if you have any ideas for a title, hit me up with them.


Verse 1
Cause we all know that love
Is a fatal car crash
Thats waiting to happen
It's times like these when I wish I was anyone but me
But don't you think it's odd
When I just might love you
More than you do
We're heading straight for a dream that only belongs to me

Pre-Chorus
And I can scream your name
We'll never feel the same
So tear me down and soak up all the love from my veins
And when I scream your name
I wish you would do the same
To lift me up and put some fuel on the flame
(Won't ever burn away -scream-)

Tonight...

Chorus
Walk away and hold your head up high
What if, all the city lights filled up the sky
Well I just want you to know
And I'll believe
And I just wish I could show you
Life with me
And if only I could show you life with me

Verse 2
And we all make a stop
Only to start up again
Whether you go left or right
Your heading for a sky thats only filled with flames
And we all turn the clocks
To the minute we first met
On the second of that hour
I took the train heading where I still don't know

Pre-Chorus
And I can scream your name
We'll never feel the same
So tear me down and soak up all the love from my veins
And when I scream your name
I wish you would do the same
To lift me up and put some fuel on the flame
(Won't ever burn away -scream-)

Tonight...

Chorus
Walk away and hold your head up high
What if, all the city lights filled up the sky
Well I just want you to know
And I'll believe
And I just wish I could show you
Life with me
And if only I could show you life with me

Bridge
And if only I could show you life with me
Every fan is spinning above our heads
As we lay down inside the sheets on our beds
This is the song to show you who I am
Like a speck drawn upon our blueprint plan

And if only I could show you life with me
Then I'd believe
I just wish I could show you life with me

Chorus
Walk away and hold your head up high
What if, all the city lights filled up the sky
Well I just want you to know
And I'll believe
And I just wish I could show you
Life with me
And if only I could show you life with me
Then I'd believe
And if only I could show you life with me
And if only I could show you life with me
And if only I could show you life with me

Alex Djaferis
10/26/03, 09:36 AM
i like it brandon.i can relate to it.

Touched
10/26/03, 12:25 PM
Major clap clap. That's some good stuff there.

MaybeOneDay
10/26/03, 03:02 PM
Thanks to both of you guys.:cool: