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Used
10/27/03, 08:58 PM
My hands bleed because I’m unstable
Your scream is stuck inside of me
The exhaling of your breath onto my skin
Takes my breath away.
Gasping for air.
This is the end of the road
Is there any way for us to surrender?
Looks like we’re shut in.
Does it make you weak in the knees?
Do your hands shake too?
The whisper,
The silence,
The sweet nothings,
That barely fill the air.
Hold me back,
Or hold me down,
I can settle on my own.
Your hopes are high this time
“Don’t ever leave”…
We’ll look back at this time spent
And wonder whether it was worth it
Well, was it?
I don’t want to sound incessant
But do you regret waking up beside me every morning?
The glitter on you face
Is making mine seem worthless
When we think of everything that happened
We’ll just laugh at each other
But not right now
No, not right now.

mayshadowsburn
10/27/03, 11:04 PM
Originally posted by Used
My hands bleed because I’m unstable
Your scream is stuck inside of me
The exhaling of your breath onto my skin
Takes my breath away.
Gasping for air.
This is the end of the road
Is there any way for us to surrender?
Looks like we’re shut in.
Does it make you weak in the knees?
Do your hands shake too?
The whisper,
The silence,
The sweet nothings,
That barely fill the air.
Hold me back,
Or hold me down,
I can settle on my own.
Your hopes are high this time
“Don’t ever leave”…
We’ll look back at this time spent
And wonder whether it was worth it
Well, was it?
I don’t want to sound incessant
But do you regret waking up beside me every morning?
The glitter on you face
Is making mine seem worthless
When we think of everything that happened
We’ll just laugh at each other
But not right now
No, not right now.

wow, that was completely awesome! did u write that?
It's really good, I can picture it composed :)

AllThingsGrey03
10/28/03, 09:29 AM
Awesome piece! I like the lines ...
"Your scream is stuck inside of me
The exhaling of your breath onto my skin
Takes my breath away."
Nice work

Used
10/28/03, 01:07 PM
Thank guys! and yes I did write it by the way. Thanks again for the kind words!

chaosandlove
11/10/03, 06:01 PM
whoa,what an amazing poem. i can relate to it. nice job.