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thegraveyard
12/02/07, 06:55 PM
JUST TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK, HONESTLY. I DONT KNOW.

Title: Sweet Revenge

Verse 1
In my time of need
When i needed you the most
And you turned your back on me
And watched me fall down the abyss
As the darkness swallowed me whole
I swore my revenge upon your soul

Verse 2
You had your chance
But you backed away
And now i see it in your eyes
The fear swelling up
And its filling you up to the very edge
My revenge upon you was my very pledge

Verse 3
A saved soul
is a forsaken one
returning from a tourture
unbareable to think of
the suporting hand lets go
and you find youself in a place you no longer know

Course
a look into the past
thoughts of your actions
a memory that will last
with overdone reactions
is nothing more then your sweet revenge

Verse 4
a deep breath in
regaining your focus
claiming the glory you wanted
the scene is put into repay
and then calmly you walk away

Course
a look into the past
thoughts of your actions
a memory that will last
with overdone reactions
is nothing more then your sweet revenge

arel13
12/03/07, 09:21 AM
oh yea i like it deffinately awesome!!!!!!!! keep the shit up

thegraveyard
12/03/07, 10:24 AM
thanks man, anyone else have anything to say?

Aries_Love
02/15/08, 09:10 PM
im sorry, i dont want to sound mean
but the rhyming was too much, it sounded very forced.