What's Done Is Done

[MaybeOneDay]

"What's Done Is Done"

Verse 1
And if we look on the map
Then can you tell us where we are
And I hate you for what you did
But I hate you more for who you are

And on our drive home
We raced across the road that led us nowhere
Only hoping to arrive at
Somewhere we could be alone
(where we could be alone)

Pre-Chorus
And as you breathe
I can feel it on my face
And I'm sure I hate you

Chorus
What's done is done
Only till you do it again
So why don't you tell me
About who is next in line
So I can warn them
And let them know that
They won't be broken
They're just gonna die inside

Verse 2
And if we read all the signs right
Then maybe one of us can succeed
Cause I hate you for what you did
But I hate you more for who you are

So please stop breathing
For only a few minutes
And place this bag
Over top of your head
We've stopped your cheating
Just make sure you wrap it tightly
(wrap it tightly)

Pre-Chorus
And as you sleep
I can hear it in my head
And I'm sure I hate you

Chorus
What's done is done
Only till you do it again
So why don't you tell me
About who is next in line
So I can warn them
And let them know that
They won't be broken
They're just gonna die inside

Bridge
Turn off your radar for a minute
And we'll see if you can read
The signs I'm sending out
Turn on your heart just for a minute
And we'll see if you care
To know, I hate you

Chorus x2
What's done is done
Only till you do it again
So why don't you tell me
About who is next in line
So I can warn them
And let them know that
They won't be broken
They're just gonna die inside
What's done is done
Only till you do it again
So why don't you tell me
About who is next in line
So I can warn them
And let them know that
I'll let them know that
They're just gonna die inside

[para ser libre]

The song was good, i actually liked it alot...it was pretty killer

Heres what didn't work for me

So please stop breathing
For only a few minutes
And place this bag
Over top of your head
We've stopped your cheating
Just make sure you wrap it tightly
(wrap it tightly)

This seemed to break the flow of the whole song...a good message if it were cut down, it seems to cluttered in words. If there were a way to shorten this up and still have it mean the same, then that would be good.

other than this i liked it

[Alex Djaferis]

that was real real good brandon...the first verse is freekin killer.

[Poor Excuse]

talk about something else in your songs besides "hating you"..

move away from the senses fail cds dude

[para ser libre]

Originally posted by Poor Excuse
talk about something else in your songs besides "hating you"..

move away from the senses fail cds dude





if you want to hear something different...write something different.