Singing Advice

[l Senses l Fail]

After being forced into trying, I've come to like singing. Im looking for some constructive criticism on things I can do to become a better singer. Things like Senses Fail, Finch, Static Lullaby, etc. Heres some songs of me singing Senses Fail for anyone with the time who doesnt care to offer some advice. Thanks for your time for anyone who does.

Senses Fail - Bloody Romance (http://www.djrossstar.org/bloodyromance.wav)
Senses Fail - 187 (http://www.djrossstar.org/187.wav)

[Heartcore]

not too bad, very much like buddy, which is kinda whiney, but nuthin' wrong w/ that, it's emo anyway so it's allowed

[Jinjavitus]

Nice..