At Times Of Apathy I Compose A Song

[thecurerocks182]

Well, its been awhile since I last posted something. I just finished my semester of school so i found myself with some free time on my hand. Anyways, I got the house all to myself for a couple hours today and the resultant was this song (music and all). It is nothing great, but it's something. I hope people still remember me here.

At Times Of Apathy I Compose A Song (http://www.sendspace.com/file/07nc67) (here's a link to hear the song if you are interested)

Well, I've been here once before
And I’ve made friends with these sounds
This is the life I’ve paved
I aint never going to change, never going to change
So, I have to make good with what I have
This face, this voice
It is the cards I was dealt
It aint never going to change, never going to change

Yeah, my life is like a pillow under the head of the dead
Not too sure why it’s really there, but it feels just as right
And so there it will remain until yanked out by some uncaring hands

How mesmerized I am
By the things beyond my window
How tempting it is to jump
But things will never ever change, never ever change
So, I’ll just wait inside this cell
With the promise of a change
I step back from the ledge
But nothing's ever going to change, never going to change

Now, remembering the fools
Who snapped their spines like a pretzel
Trying to make that same jump
I was once just like them
But I made a decision
Yeah, I was the smart one

[ArTkY_]

As usual, lyrics are very, very solid. I don't really have much to say, sorry. I never can find too much wrong with your work. This isn't your best, certainly, but there's nothing wrong with it, you know? So good job.

Anyways, the song was really good, haha. I'm always a fan of your music. Keep it up.

[missmatilde]

I really loved hearing this... only thing is the recording, but... enjoyed it a lot! :-)
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[a speedo model]

Agreed with Tariq the lyrics are great as usual. Not your best but I really couldn't find anything I'd fix or anything wrong.

I'll download the recording tonight and listen tomorrow.

[thecurerocks182]

As usual, lyrics are very, very solid. I don't really have much to say, sorry. I never can find too much wrong with your work. This isn't your best, certainly, but there's nothing wrong with it, you know? So good job.

Anyways, the song was really good, haha. I'm always a fan of your music. Keep it up.
Thanks a lot. I think if you lived around here we would be good friends:-) . Anyways, the song was pretty much just me messing around on my guitar...so i didn't expect much of a reaction from it. In fact, I experienced immense trepidation upon posting it and fought the temptations of removing it after doing so because i thought people would hate it...so I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's kind of like a happy song for me. I haven't played my guitar in a month so it also felt good to write something new.
PS - if you have any new lyrics or recordings i would be happy to read/hear them. I have been pretty busy with school lately, but i have a couple weeks off. Thanks.

I really loved hearing this... only thing is the recording, but... enjoyed it a lot! :-)
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Thanks a lot for your time and encouragement! I recorded the song in one take, and i accidentally mix up the lyrics when singing so some of the lines don't make much sense if you listen closely. I wish i could do quality recordings...maybe one day :-). It's a dream of mine...Thanks again.
Agreed with Tariq the lyrics are great as usual. Not your best but I really couldn't find anything I'd fix or anything wrong.

I'll download the recording tonight and listen tomorrow.
Thanks! A lot of the lines are fillers...well, to me anyways. I always wanted to do a song with a repetitive line throughout the song, and i just built the song around it. Well, I hope you enjoy the song...Thanks!