The White Collar Con-Artist

[Rufio217]

Story Behind The Song: none, just kinda flowed out, jambled and uncoherent so i wrote it down, but it actually has a meaning


The White Collar Con-Artist


Incincerity is running rampant
in these walls of conformation
a breeding ground for killers
but one shall mark the way

eye-witness tto the blatent disregaurd
of individuality in this world
and this indoctrine
just a course in apathy

the demise of all thats sacred
a downfall we know
a sacrilege on what you say is evil
is wrong i want you to know

panicstrickon, looking for answers
to all the questions no one knows
led by the blind
in a world we need to see
this isn't order,
it's the wrath of a martinet

unjust he rules the hipocracy
leading lambs to slaughter
we need a "savior"
one to mark the way

[Touched]

Nice title, quite a good song too.

[Rufio217]

but did you get what it was about?

[IGuessItsOkay]

big words. everywhere. I mean, I get what the big words mean...but it seems somewhat like forced sophistication, and detracts from the song...i can't grasp the meaning except for the title gives away a little of what it might be about. my suggestion is simplify that..cut out the words that don't get used all that often in everday life (you can keep a couple, it will make you look intelligent which is good)..I just kept thinking about those words and couldn't think about much else..including the meaning...they distract.

Otherwise I liked what I saw.

[Rufio217]

the big words make it what it is, because the whole song is obviously about a preacher, a priest, a father, what ever teh fuck they are for your religion, and the words are words that they wouuld use everyday in church so it adds to the mockery...