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brandnew_punk_7
11/15/03, 07:30 AM
the title is "Pointless" its just something i wrote to cope....


your lies fill my lungs; i could choke
but since your words are empty ill float
you burn the paper where,our trust,i wrote
what was a declaration is now just a post-it note

tombstones and flowers;a logical connection
the link is the ground;one grows out of it
the other shows that someones been put in it
a cold shallow grave where emotion lies within

faceless and forgotten except for the concrete block
it just shows...it all comes down to how many ticks you can get out of lifes clock

the hands turn...holding your life...then they let go...and you let me go..

search for something,because if your looking for nothing
dont be disappointed when you dont find anything
and the realization that youve been living with out meaning

placid as a pebble falling into a lake
everyones waiting,patiently, for your next mistake
but now youve got to share, as always others will take
they'll call you friend but walk over you to get their big break

whats friendship if not a temporary
a blink in the eye of a timeless theory
they wait until your broken;worn and weary
we used to be friends; now you wont get near me
because the social status you adore fears me


search for something,because if your looking for nothing
dont be disappointed when you dont find anything
and the realization that youve been living with out meaning:huh:

Touched
11/15/03, 10:05 AM
That was really good, better than the other one that you have posted. There was more feeling and meaning in this one.