PDA

View Full Version : please anyone read this/i need feedback please....


brandnew_punk_7
11/16/03, 05:48 AM
its called a place past here......written in about 3 minutes at 7 in the morning...i hope you get the message of the song

i really messed up this time
failed every expectation
calculate out all the mistakes
you'll have to use scientific notation

look at me, now in my finest hour
take my lifes failures and
mulitply them to the 17th power
all ive got left is my music and my band

its always the times,when your thinking about those times
when everything seemed to be colored out of line
but until someone said something you didnt really mind

"where are we now
its a place past here
beyond the crime and punishment
handed out by our peers
its a place to safe to contaminate
an idea to simple to complicate"

when you come to, do you realize
or can you feel the people staring
but they're not looking at you but
actually they are just comparing(themselves to you)

envy fills the room for something
the freedom to mess up and not care
but its priceless comodity and no
really is willing or wanting to share(themselves with you)

its always the times,when your thinking about those times
when everything seemed to be colored out of line
but until someone said something you didnt really mind


"where are we now
its a place past here
beyond the crime and punishment
handed out by our peers
its a place to safe to contaminate
an idea to simple to complicate":huh: