A Black Widow Refugee

[Rufio217]

Really short, and really unfinished...



alone she will as she
as she weeps in her room
not done 'till the world will know
she is unhappy here
you would never know it's fake
her pin of passion and pain
strategy places it there
on her shoulder side
the key to her deception
she will sit and wait
watch and wonder
as a praying mantius
she feeds when she is done
a source of pleasure
it will keep her occupied
out of sight
out of mind
she will forget,
it's temporary
it will only take time
until she hurts again
until she hunts again
until she cries again

[Rufio217]

bump......anyone

[BurnFromWithin]

ha... hahaha.... hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah ahaha

and you're telling me to die...

[Rufio217]

ha... hahaha.... hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah ahaha




recent studies show......That was ALMOST cool.

[Driveitthrough]

I liked it all except for this part:
"as a praying mantius
she feeds when she is done
a source of pleasure
it will keep her occupied"

It didn't really seem to fit in, but the rest of the song was really good. I really like the first few lines... the repetition of "she will/as she" would sound cool with music. Good job... fine tune this beast a bit more and you'll have some great lyrics.

[Touched]

I wasn't too keen on it.