Without a friend

[rufio242]

A loner with a problem,
just a loser with no promises,
He's just a quiter with no alibi,
and we wont know why,

Life was just a picknic
until he lost his dad,
After that, he knew he would
never be the same as before,
Mom knew, but what could she do
Nothing took the pain,
everything just would remind them of the life they had,

With dad gone,
he lost a friend
With his friend gone,
he lost a dad,
With nothing left to fight for,
he gave up the feeling that keept him in,

Leaving the house,
he turns of mom,
this would be the last
time he would see her,
As he walks to the ally
he passes the park,
bringing back memories of the times they had,
Loading up the gun with the single shot,
he's talking to himself to see if hes ready or not,

Just when hes about fire,
he remembers the look he mother gave him,
this wouldn't make it better,
only make it worse,
Movies with mom when she'd hide candy in her purse,
seeing his dad being loaded in the hurse,
Shots rang out from down the block,
he throws the gun away and he starts to walk


anyfeed back would be bueno.(that spanish for good)

[punk rock angel]

that was rad.:) it was all sweet and sad. and that part where he wanted to kill him self i liked. good job. :)