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fallingintoyou
11/26/03, 05:27 PM
I can't explain this feeling I get
Whenever I hear you play
Whenever I see you smile
Whenever I look into those riveting blue eyes
It's bliss
It's heaven to me
This is what it should be about
The happiness
The rapture
The contentment to just sit in silence
Because no words need to be said in order to be completely happy
You bring out the best in me
More than anyone else could
I don't know how to explain whatever this feeling is
But I feel it because I see myself in you
More of me tha I thought anyone else could ever possess
And I WANT you to have all of me
My heart
My soul
My all
I give it freely

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please...someone tell me how horrible this is. maybe my ego will shrink. :) Just Kidding. but I DO need some feedback so...whatever you think.

Micah Aldridge
12/09/03, 05:57 AM
I for one am happier then hell to see a post that goes beyond"Dark,Black,Knife,Choke,Sad,Scared,H ate" I mean that shit just gets fucking boring after awhile.

To be honest I don't like then ending,,, kinda WHAM if ya know what I mean