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wishxfulthinker
11/26/03, 09:57 PM
I'm leaving the days that kept you at your best, leaving all the rain to fall where you rest. The ground is lit with candles burning your name. I miss you so much I can feel it in my veins.

And you breathe in me.

I'm tasting the air that just feels like weight, staring at the sky the stars desecrate. My knees fall beneath me the flowers are slain, I miss you so much I can feel it my veins.

And you breathe in me.

There is nothing left to keep you close, I'm walking away from what I love most. Breaking up inside me is the heart of your grave, I miss you so much I feel it in my veins.

And you breathe in me.

And you live in me.

I miss you so much, I can feel it in the rain.

IGuessItsOkay
12/02/03, 12:12 PM
Very awesome. That really puts for such a desperate feeling. It's so great, it makes my heart sink. Good Job.

punkpixie
12/04/03, 09:09 AM
Thats wonderful. You put that emotion out there really well, in a really simple way. My heart sank too!:(