This song is untitled.... help me title it.

[Driveitthrough]

Speaking softly with fingers crossed,
Your eyes glued to the floor,
This lie is one I've heard all too much,
Now decide: My loss or yours?

CHORUS
Long winters made even longer
By your longing stare,
Yet still my eyes, they long to see
Behind the mask you wear.

Hushed phrases carefully placed,
Not meaning to impose
My starving ears strain for your words
Despite your growing nose.

Long winters made even longer
By your longing stare
Yet still my eyes, they long to see
Behind the mask you wear

If we could go outside,
Go running in the rain,
Would you smile and laugh then,
While the water washed you clean?

CHORUS


That's it. My band plays this song, and I'm tired of calling it "untitled", but all the obvious title possibilities like "Mask You Wear" or "Long Winters" seem too.... well, obvious. Give me some suggestions on either titles or revisions for this song. I would appreciate it. Thanks!

[punkpixie]

I love it!, Especially the last bit about the rain. How about calling it "running in the rain". It has a nice ring to it, even though it is a line used in the song I don't think it's too obvious either.:cool: Good stuff.

[para ser libre]

Originally posted by Driveitthrough
Speaking softly with fingers crossed,
Your eyes glued to the floor,
This lie is one I've heard all too much,
Now decide: My loss or yours?

CHORUS
Long winters made even longer
By your longing stare,
Yet still my eyes, they long to see
Behind the mask you wear.

Hushed phrases carefully placed,
Not meaning to impose
My starving ears strain for your words
Despite your growing nose.

Long winters made even longer
By your longing stare
Yet still my eyes, they long to see
Behind the mask you wear

If we could go outside,
Go running in the rain,
Would you smile and laugh then,
While the water washed you clean?

CHORUS


That's it. My band plays this song, and I'm tired of calling it "untitled", but all the obvious title possibilities like "Mask You Wear" or "Long Winters" seem too.... well, obvious. Give me some suggestions on either titles or revisions for this song. I would appreciate it. Thanks!



I cmae up with 2

"The Silent Deception"

"Heads or Tails"

[IGuessItsOkay]

I think that Heads or Tails suggestion was great, and that is what I would title it if it were my song.

[Touched]

Heads or Tails would be good, excellent song too.

[Driveitthrough]

You guys are the best -- Heads or Tails it is. Thanks a lot for your suggestions and feedback.

[BrandNewPunk]

I'd call it "Drowning in Winter"

let me know what you do end up calling it, i like it

[popdisaster530]

Whats up, the songs are awesome, whats ur band called? WHere are you guyz based? Keep it up. later

[Driveitthrough]

Wow... i really like the Drowning in Winter idea. Thanks. Umm my band's called Hapless, and we're in West Bend, WI, but we're on hold right now because I moved to college. Damn school...

[BrandNewPunk]

hey no problem. if you like that, and you have trouble with other titles or lyrics, send them to me. I've got a million ideas. I'm a lyricist and in a band out of Virginia Beach, VA. I'd love to read more of your stuff.
-chris

[blink182drumagh]

hey cabin fever mite be good...cuz ur talkin about winters and lies so its like a frozen sickness...plus i think it always sounds cool