antidote for a winter heartache..

[turtlefootrx]

hey guys. i wrote this a couple days ago. it rhymes in weird places and sometimes doesnt at all, but any comments/creative input besides that would be appreciated. the first part is aboot my best friend cuz hes been a total jackass when he found out we liked the same person. either way...read on..

we constantly clash heads with the mark of being 'best friends'
im scarred for life but its okay
i try to fake this anyway
so what am i supposed to do?
take back my feelings and just sign them off to you?
i dont think so
and i wish that she was here with me tonite
as i fall asleep i dream that this was all but real
memories erased and left without a trace
but is it worth it?
my mind is cloudy but one thing seems clear
and i dont know if its worth my time
but all these dreams seem so real
im losing my mind
i wish i had the guts to tell you more
the lack of confidence leaves me lying on the floor
sometimes i think im better off alone
but whats the point of being king without a throne?
all i want to hear is what i wish you had to say
and im going deaf
i dont know how much more i cant take before i break
i just need peace of mind but i cant find that here
its a snowy winter midnite get me out of here
if i had a dime for every time ive tried id be worth more than what im asking for.
what can i say that would make you change your mind?
is there anything? i promise i would try.

[Touched]

Good work, best friends are great fun to write about when they're asses.