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brandnew_punk_7
12/04/03, 01:46 PM
you had the key to my heart
but you broke in and you broke it

lying is her profession
she gained my trust she became my obsession

the pain shes cause me would be labled
viewer discretion....im only guessin...it was all for fun

her hurtful indecision cuts me with precision
she doesnt know who i am.....

her hurtful indecision cuts me with precision
but she doest care or give a damn


the pain shes cause me would be labled
viewer discretion....im only guessin...it was all for fun

well i hope you know that youve left your mark
you lured me in then you raped my heart

you left it bleeding you left it to scar
but stopping loving you is the hardest part

her hurtful indecision cuts me with precision
her hurtful indecision cuts me with precision
she doesnt know who i am.....
her hurtful indecision cuts me with precision

blessed is the one that finds love
but im cursed for the fact youre all im thinking of
blessed is the one that finds love
its a tragedy metaphorically drugged

soreloser
12/04/03, 07:33 PM
awesome lyrics... i couldnt help singing it to myself, im not sure what kind of genre ur making this but to me it could be a great screamo song... but whatever, keep makin em.. i was impressed

peace

BrandNewPunk
12/06/03, 12:47 PM
I like it, but I think it needs some work