Just one more mediocre song to add to the multitudes

[popdisaster530]

I got a good life if thats what you call it
i got a dad whose not an alchoholic
i had a dog but he ran away
im optomistic that hell come back someday

but for now
im all right
im content with being alone all night
but

i got a phone so im not really all alone but
i dont like to use it cause i have to turn my music down
dont have a girlfriend my schedule wont afford
im too busy being really fuckin bored

CHORUS
i take it easy wathcing people like you
you make me uneasy with the things that you do
if we met we wouldnt really get along
think your in charge but you dont know how wrong you are
yea you dont know how wrong you are
END

THats it so far. the verse is kinda pointless but the chorus is about a guy that i REALLY hate. Comments/Critisism would be aweseom as usual and a name for it would be nice

[mediocrgreenday]

Originally posted by popdisaster530

i got a phone so im not really all alone but
i dont like to use it cause i have to turn my music down


the rest of the verse isnt bad... but that part just doesnt seem to fit. how about something like...

im not alone when my phone makes its ringing sound
but i dont like to use it cause i have to turn my music down

just as corny but hey it rymes like the rest of it does