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blink182drumagh
12/07/03, 08:46 PM
-Ill stay 4 u-
V1
im nothin more than a blip on the radar screen
im unknown to the world, im unseen
thats y no1 cares if i lived 2 c tommorrow
i bet my loss wont bring any1 sorrow

V2
wat a way 2 end my years
all the sceams it hurts my ears
cuz no 1 is livin happily w/ me around
when im gone the world will be serene it will be sound

V3
the time is 2 late 2 go back on yesterday
the things i have done, the words i say
its all a misconception this thing called life
thats y im about 2 put an end 2 every1's strife

C
tommorrow holds more consequences
it holds problems and such
but ur a friend 2 me, like my crutch
ill stay 4 u(x2)
cuz our friendship is true

ill put the chorus in wherever..its a work in progress

this 1 is about sittin in rooms listnin 2 lectures and wantin somethin better

-Away from this-

y does this guy stand and declare
cant he understand that we dont care
we r thinkin of cooler things not in this place
but we better stay 4 now just in case

all we want is 2 go and have fun
play our music, but we must wait till he's done
this is goin in slow motion it seems
this is even worse than my worst dreams

bored as we sit back and roll our eyes
this is one of the guys im startin 2 dispise
plz let this end, this test of misery
its startin 2 kill me, its startin 2 kill me

we just wanna leave and jump in our cars
drive away and sleep under the stars
we cant stand these rules and regualtions
we r gettin outta here and we r takin the hacian(not sure how that is spelled...also its an inside joke...so....it may seem funny 2 some1 that doesnt no)

again...reply:)

blink182drumagh
12/12/03, 03:08 PM
again people plz reply!

blink182drumagh
12/18/03, 11:00 AM
hey reply 2 this plz

Micah Aldridge
12/19/03, 03:29 AM
I will reply when it is written in english, not trashy online "2CUL4U" shit, respect your own song. Damn

blink182drumagh
12/19/03, 06:24 PM
Originally posted by Micah Aldridge
I will reply when it is written in english, not trashy online "2CUL4U" shit, respect your own song. Damn

how about i write it the fuckin way i want 2 and u get off my back about it shit lick....i dont c u writin this song so dont think u r fuck face...u pig bastard

peace

decisionpending
12/19/03, 07:19 PM
what's the last thing a drummer says in his band?
'hey guys, let's try one of my songs'

keeping this in mind, i say that this is alright considering that you are aiming for the simple plan/good charlotte type of song (and if you are not, try varying your AABB rhyme scheme), i would rather hear 'away from this' than 'perfect'

and dont be rude to micah

blink182drumagh
12/19/03, 09:06 PM
Originally posted by decisionpending
what's the last thing a drummer says in his band?
'hey guys, let's try one of my songs'

keeping this in mind, i say that this is alright considering that you are aiming for the simple plan/good charlotte type of song (and if you are not, try varying your AABB rhyme scheme), i would rather hear 'away from this' than 'perfect'

and dont be rude to micah

hahaha thnkx....i love that....."and dont be rude to micah"
but seriously thnx