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ACanOfSpam
12/10/03, 05:05 PM
[An 8 Dollar Hotel Orange]

I’d do anything just to see you again
If it weren’t for the world standing in my way
I just want to spend one more day with you before I die
Is that too much to ask? That I can breathe again for just one day?
My life is a blur without you
I feel like nothing without you
You are the closest thing to perfect and I guess that’s why
I won’t ever forget you, even when I die

Chorus:
You are my oxygen, keeping me alive for so long
You’re always with me, even when you’re gone
Yet still, I miss you so much
I miss looking into your eyes and seeing everything that is good
I miss being with you and doing all that I could
Just to make you satisfied like you always wanted to be
That’s all I want: just you and me

I can’t wait for the future but time’s going by so slow
I seem to see you everywhere I go
My life turns into a dream come true
When I’m with you
It’s like when you stare at a fire so intently
That the fire becomes brighter and it’s surroundings dim suddenly
That’s what happens when I’m around you
And all I can hear is your voice
I forget about the rest of the world and all I see is you
It’s almost as if I have no choice

Chorus

You can be described as something to die for
A person that never gives up and walks out the door
I didn’t think there would be anyone out there for me
But I guess I was wrong, because we are meant to be
Life is like an eight dollar hotel orange
The price is ridiculous and it doesn’t even taste that good
But when I give the orange to you, it puts a smile on your face
That makes sense, I guess

Chorus (x2)

……god I hate oranges……

TheFallenScene
12/10/03, 08:30 PM
Just another very typical song about, "Ohh..I miss you and I will die for you". Using lines about "fire" is getting very..very annoying in songs. "You are my oxygen"..No..No..Stop it please I plead for you to stop with the lyrics. Except for...

"Life is like an eight dollar hotel orange
The price is ridiculous and it doesn’t even taste that good
But when I give the orange to you, it puts a smile on your face"

Very..very! Strange but yet still creative! It may be sorta corny, but if you could make the entire song somewhat creative like that...It may just be half-decent.

10 Being the Best, 5 Being Typical, 1 Being the Worse
SCENE POINTS : 4.5 (Extra half-point for the 'orange')