I Need Somebody.

[Surf4Palms11]

V:
Have you ever thought
Thought about leaving your love behind(behind)
The leaves have fallen just like you.
I love you, why did you leave me.

The greens are getting whiter now
as the window of my car fades my vision through
Where are you, and who wants you now.

Chorus:
I need you with me now,
You have left me in the cold, the winter night.(winter night)
I want you,
now you warm her with your love.

V:
Did you ever think,
Think about how much I could make you happy(happy)
The snow is falling down among my shoulders
and my emotions are over taking my body

Chorus:
I need you with me now,
You have left me in the cold, the winder night(gets darker)
I need you,
Now you warm her with your love.

V:
Have you ever known
How much it hurt when you left me
the leaves are growing back
but now, my love for you is fading off

Chorus:
I want you with me now
You have left my heart
I loved you
but you thew it out.


V:
Do you know
how happy he makes me
My surf board waxed and the flowers have bloomed
Hes with me.

Now I don't need you at all.
you had my heart
I love him
And now I'm happy again
(Happy...four times)
[END]


Please tell me your comments.

[TheFallenScene]

I believe I've read this song before. A song like this has only been posted on this site over Two..Thr..Two Hundred times?

(Don't..Don't start slamming your key board yet!)

Good..Good..Good. Enjoyable simple song! I liked it. Just the part about the surfboard? Because the song revolves around "HIM and NATURE". Surfboard..replace it with..I don't know..something that goes with flowers?

Much better than most songs that have been posted on here, nothing special though. Just another typical song, this one just..better.

10 Being the Best, 5 Being Typical, 1 Being the Worse
SCENE POINTS : 6

[Surf4Palms11]

Thanks, ya..This is kinda the first song I've actually written with music, and I really like your comments! Thanks a lot. :)