popdisaster530
12/13/03, 11:17 AM
Hey..new song.. just read&reply please!!!!! comments/critisism escpecially critisism.
BAD YEAR
VERSE 1
(What a wonderful day)
its raining outside
(i dont understand)
what uve got to hide
from me.
the king.
of critisism
a catalysism
(is nothing in comparison)
to there laughter
(and its geting more and more)
glaringly obvious
that what u wont tell me
is what i dont
want to hear the most
PRE-CHORUS
i think i know whats going on here
another side effect of one long bad year
And im tired of using this excuse
and im sorry, but its the truth, im sorry
CHORUS
Youve caught me on a bad day
my bad year
All the things i didnt want to say
went pn here
they came and went
and im feeling kinda spent
(after two long days of wandering)
AROUND
(after two long days of wondering)
WHAT WENT DOWN
(ill be here all week)
not that you care
(if your tired of laughing)
pretend im not there
or better yet
blame it on my bad year
VERSE 2
It seems like only yesterday
(we-went-dry of-things to-argue-about)
& it seems like only yesterday
(i gave up and you ran out)
& it seems like only yesterday
(all i could do)
was think about a better day
(a day without you)
PRE-CHORUS
CHORUS
SOLO
END
Thats it, it may not make much structural sense, but it works out when played right. Please, help me out. later:cool: :cool:
BAD YEAR
VERSE 1
(What a wonderful day)
its raining outside
(i dont understand)
what uve got to hide
from me.
the king.
of critisism
a catalysism
(is nothing in comparison)
to there laughter
(and its geting more and more)
glaringly obvious
that what u wont tell me
is what i dont
want to hear the most
PRE-CHORUS
i think i know whats going on here
another side effect of one long bad year
And im tired of using this excuse
and im sorry, but its the truth, im sorry
CHORUS
Youve caught me on a bad day
my bad year
All the things i didnt want to say
went pn here
they came and went
and im feeling kinda spent
(after two long days of wandering)
AROUND
(after two long days of wondering)
WHAT WENT DOWN
(ill be here all week)
not that you care
(if your tired of laughing)
pretend im not there
or better yet
blame it on my bad year
VERSE 2
It seems like only yesterday
(we-went-dry of-things to-argue-about)
& it seems like only yesterday
(i gave up and you ran out)
& it seems like only yesterday
(all i could do)
was think about a better day
(a day without you)
PRE-CHORUS
CHORUS
SOLO
END
Thats it, it may not make much structural sense, but it works out when played right. Please, help me out. later:cool: :cool: