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AtticusD0RK
12/14/03, 06:15 PM
Okay, Theres a part in this song where i can t fill in the gap, help me out!



The Starlight is screaming
Their Distracting Reckoning
Dive deep into the wells of salvation
To save me from Abomination

The trees are cold and fallen
On the ground, dead and open
No birds to sing, to revive
Any creature hiding inside

Chorus
A single Flame
Escapes from a burning match
Into a world, Where Ignorance reigns
A world, where nothing lasts

The rain drops fall, a rugged battalion
It penetrates the weak (Insert rhyming word here)
Where the clouds are parting, a gray sun shines
Searching for a way to turn back time

Sail into the wind, soar high
Across the moon, don't let it cry
The night is all we have to lift
To hide the fearful, an honest gift

blink182drumagh
12/18/03, 08:39 AM
i think ur song is pretty good....u use huge words i like that make some more so i can read em

AtticusD0RK
12/24/03, 07:25 PM
thanks:cool:

IGuessItsOkay
12/24/03, 10:39 PM
either "the weak and the fallen"
or "the weakened resolve of the stallion"

lollirot
12/24/03, 11:19 PM
What's the point of the song?

This is an honest question because I don't know how I can fill that gap if I don't know what it means, unless you want some random rhyming words in there.

GREENatarisDAY
12/26/03, 12:14 AM
its very good, nice structure and use of words.

GREENatarisDAY
12/26/03, 12:17 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by AtticusD0RK
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Chorus
A single Flame
Escapes from a burning match
Into a world, Where Ignorance reigns
A world, where nothing last

i love that