"Our Beautiful Society"........

[BuriedAlive]

I wrote this yesterday. I'm pretty happy with it. I have a strong message to send and I'm sure you guys will get it by reading this. thanks ahead of time for reading it. i would love to hear your opinion on the song!


"Our Beautiful Society"
We've become martyrs to out own society
we will do anything to fit the current trend
a lonely society built on beauty and love
which both are still misunderstood
too judge-mental about the cover
never wanting to flip through the pages
as i walk by, the thought of a label,
it slowly rings in your head..

Our lives have become a dying trend
we have forgotten how to live
too concentrated on their looks
everyone is classified into a single word
human should be that label
but that would only be considered absurd
a new ring sounds out to a new label
like a new species has been born
classified in groups, but
broken down by our own hate

[blink182drumagh]

that song is actually pretty good....i like songs about hatin trends even though at some point i wanted 2 fit in and all but my friends showed me that its not all about bein "popular" and wat not but just havin fun and livin the moment....i thank them 4 that....ur song reminds me of this and that is y i find it such a great song....good job

peace

[BuriedAlive]

thanks man. im glad you understood it. i just tried to propose a topic that helped people. im pretty sure most people have been through this one time or another... well hopefully i get more responses.

[GREENatarisDAY]

Originally posted by BuriedAlive
I wrote this yesterday. I'm pretty happy with it. I have a strong message to send and I'm sure you guys will get it by reading this. thanks ahead of time for reading it. i would love to hear your opinion on the song!


"Our Beautiful Society"
We've become martyrs to out own society
we will do anything to fit the current trend
a lonely society built on beauty and love
which both are still misunderstood
too judge-mental about the cover
never wanting to flip through the pages
as i walk by, the thought of a label,
it slowly rings in your head..

Our lives have become a dying trend
we have forgotten how to live
too concentrated on their looks
everyone is classified into a single word
human should be that label
but that would only be considered absurd
a new ring sounds out to a new label
like a new species has been born
classified in groups, but
broken down by our own hate

dude whatever happened to your deep meaningful writings. These lyrics are very simple and have a surfaced meaning. Maybe its just this song but your writing hasnt been the same latley.....i dunno, but you're still cool

[BuriedAlive]

ya i dont know whats wrong. maybe its just that i havent put a quality amount into any of my latest writings. i've been trying to find new topics and i guess im failing. its been hard on me. all of my latest writings havent been anything to read cuz they are kinda newer to me as a whole. i'm gonna sit down and put alot of thought into one song and really give you guys something to read.... thanks greenatarisday... i really needed that wake-up call.

[lollirot]

I agree with Greenatarisday. There's really not much to think about in those lyrics. Sounds kind of like it could be a watered-down version of a Pennywise song.

[BuriedAlive]

i really dont know much of my stuff now is kinda watered down they arent what they used to be. maybe im just in a state where i dont write anything good. hopefully its almost over...