Transmutation

[blink182drumagh]

hey this song is about me like wantin 2 fit in and then bein supported by people and understandin that that isnt wat i need 2 be happy or w/e

Transmutation

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fittin in is the biggest problem
its hard when u cant get along w/ them
maybe i wasnt meant 4 popularity
i go into their room.....they all flee
maybe this just wasnt 4 me

i could always live alone (yea)
but that thought i cant condone(not rite)
it would be a shame not 2 get along
w/ people....thats y i connect through song

everyday bleak, all the same
still not cool, still no fame
to these people its all a game
and i must be a pawn
cuz be4 i get cool here, ill be gone(if i have 2)

so ill settle w/ wat i have (yea)
un-cool, un-popular, i wont follow the fad(no)
ill be cool in my own way(w/ my friends)
and ill actually be able 2 stay
in the same room w/ people like me
cuz we r the others.....y cant u see(better luck next time)

ok ok ok im open 2 comments/criticism and anythin else that crosses ur mind

[blink182drumagh]

plz reply

[popdisaster530]

I know its hipocritical of me to say this (cause i do it all the time), but try not rhyming all the time, it makes you add words that dont fit, just to rhyme. IT sounds immature and makes it seem like your trying to hard, just find something that means alot to you, and write about it, make it like a story, as opposed to a shitty rap song. And also, all the phrases at the ends of your lines, in parenthesis, are those things said, sung, screamed or what? The syllables don't match up the way im picturing the song, but maybe i just don't understand how the song works. Besides that, good song. Later

[blink182drumagh]

yea i have started revisin already...un rhymin mostly....od

peace