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MisTakeOfTheYea
12/19/03, 06:48 PM
10 times blue

She locked her pain inside
No other would understand
Spirit sleeping somewhere cold

Not knowing where to go,
She sits alone
All alone

Wanting to be taken out of darkness out of dought.
To be set free from the lie she is living

Unable to express the way she feels
For the one she truly cares for
The one she truly fell for.

Feeling the cold razer cut in to her arm.
Knowing she is off to a place where she doesn't have to hide who she really is
Watching her blood run from her vains
The pain spills on to the floor

She crouches in a coner
there she sits alone
all alone

thexflamesxburn
12/19/03, 07:47 PM
if you cant think of a title, dont title it.

punk rock angel
12/20/03, 09:20 PM
i love it. :) its fukin rad.

MisTakeOfTheYea
12/21/03, 02:18 AM
Hey thanks for your input man!

Korvans
12/21/03, 09:14 AM
wow another song about someone trying to kill themself or whatever - neways it sucks dick...

ShelterFromCold
12/27/03, 08:18 PM
i like it except im just sick of reading about wrists being slit and dying.
cant we all cheer up.
tun off the poison the well and put in some fall out boy or something.
haha.
just kidding.

-Chris

ShelterFromCold
12/27/03, 08:23 PM
i like it except im just sick of reading about wrists being slit and dying.
cant we all cheer up.
tun off the poison the well and put in some fall out boy or something.
haha.
just kidding.

-Chris