Shameless self promo: Random Awkward

[BridgeJumper]

Not sure what to say.
Check my shizz out..
I need some musicians to do this live.
Write the songs, record (sept drums, just program them) and edit/mix it all in the studio I work at. (wow that sounds lame when I type it out)

www.myspace.com/tymeuprock (http://www.myspace.com/tymeuprock)

Some are old, some new and plan on putting some more up soon.

Any feedback would be awesome.

Thank you and goodbye.

[BridgeJumper]

Well that went over well

[The Boathouse]

Don't expect to get more than 2 responses unless you sound like a mishmash of Cartel, Boys like Girls, and some other random band that people are into right now.

My thoughts: It's good, really well put together and flows well. I think it could benefit from a few new ideas, getting a bit out of your comfort zone and stuff like that. It sounds like you have a good handle on this style of music, but maybe a road to improvement could be adding some other elements.