Judgment Night

[GREENatarisDAY]

since im seeing some new faces in here i decided to post some of my older stuff to see what you kids think

It starts when the light
is disowned and the darkness prevails
The street lights are off
and the candles have melted
before the sun took its rest
lets take our share of the night
and stab it with our cold hearts
make sure it freezes over
no need to keep this lucid
our actions speak for themselves

they’ll dwell in their lies
and the words will be smuggled
into their ears
make your deals and place the bet

It ends when with their eyes crossed out,
by dollar signs and coins
a future arrested by shades of green
ready to manifest hate and greed
words turn into numbers and decimals
but the numbers decrease
as the risks fail to pay off
and the greed sets in
suspend all trust and ethics
the bottom line is money
this is judgment night
fuck it all and place your bet

OUR DARKEST NIGHTMARE IS OUR CLEAREST FEAR

[lollirot]

I like it, it kind of reminds me of Thursday.

"and stab it with our cold hearts". I think that line is kind of weird, yeah.

[GREENatarisDAY]

thanks, yea most of my inspiration comes from rickelys lyrics which i think are some of ive ever heard. The stab it wtih our cold hearts line basically means go with your heart, stab is just another word i used for it.

Anymore comments or suggestions?

[BuriedAlive]

dang.. that wasnt bad... if i recall you used to write different... its been a while since i read one of your songs.... but it is good whether or not you changed the way you write.

[GREENatarisDAY]

thanks man

"... if i recall you used to write different"- ever since i got into thursday