Lost In A Life

[tbs152]

just pretend,
he'll ask,
can i steal this evening
just one kiss
a memory that will last forever after morning
a story for you
a tale to tell to all your fancy friends

your thoughts every mourning
whos bed am i in,
when did this start
and when will it ever end
no matter how much you have
you'll still dream of something more

just pretend
a one way conversation
a sentence ending too soon
a romance on the tip of thier tongues
a mistake he knew he was making
just pretend

this dream will last forver today
this life will end forever tomorrow
one day you'll know what love is

just know shes
almost worth dying for
these lines are blured
theres no return
bridges were crossed and burned
your living a dream
lost between reality

just you forget everything
you know about,
life
love
death
work
dreams

just pretend
a one way conversation
a sentence ending too soon
a romance on the tip of thier tongues
a mistake he knew he was making
just pretend

[saving face]

Hey i really liked this song. Its got a really cool flow to it, and a really dark side to it which just shows the passion you put in to the song. I really liked the ' A Sentence Ending Too Soon'. A nice touch to the end of the song! :)

[popdisaster530]

I liked it. There were a few parts where i was confused as to how they would "flow" like:

Originally posted by tbs152

just you forget everything
you know about,
life
love
death
work
dreams



But besides that, it was good

[saving face]

yeah i can see what you mean about that part, but im sure it could be easily sorted out when you put music to the words.

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