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tbs152
12/27/03, 12:00 PM
Someday,
We'll go run around this town
Climb up all the hills,
And see for miles
Just a juvienile dream,
One of you and me
I'll speak to you softly,
Using all those big words
Not knowing its all the little ones
That matter most

Ohh, i saw us like this
Jumping across the starlite sky,
Dancing along with the moon tonite
Never once touching the ground
Someday,
This will happen
But now thats not what matters
Its the dream thats left
Its my favorite one

From this point on,
I can see us rolling around
Your hair brushing across my face
Just know its you,
Keeping me tied to this town
A knot not to be untied
Its your eyes that keep me warm
These lonely nights

Remember,
One day we argued apples and oranges
An agrument so dumb
You laughed and said
"Conversation should last for hours"
3 hours later we were sleeping
A couch never meant for two
But we made it fit,
Ohh we made it fit

Ohh, i saw us like this
Someday,
Ohh, it'll be
Someday,
Ohh, all I'll be left with is your taste
Someday,
Ohh, it better be later
Someday,
Ohh, it'll be "dont you remember"
Someday, someday



i know its real simple and pretty basic but let me know what you think

soreloser
12/28/03, 11:17 PM
i really liked it, very catchy, the only thing that i could suggest which i kind of think has been over done and is kinda corny is the couch part with "not being able to fit... but we made it fit". other than that, not too shabby.

Touched
12/29/03, 07:00 AM
Nothing else to say but.........great. :)

tbs152
12/30/03, 10:16 AM
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01/01/04, 09:22 PM
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