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saving face
12/28/03, 01:59 PM
Im new to this site and just noticed that you post some of your own songs you've wrote yourself so I just thought Id post one of my new ones :)

Can I Call You My Favourite Little Suicide Note

She has me standing in this cue
Waiting for her to walk by
Just so I can catch a glimpse of you
And give me the idea of a new dream

She makes my heart stop
My lungs simply collapse when she walks by
How can I say this song isnt for you
When everyone I write is all about you
And im leaving
Leaving you tonight
And im leaving
Leaving you tonight

You made me wish I were dead
That I could find some way out of this nightmare
All I can see around me
Are bloated ugly corpses
With more sins than any guardian angel can cope with
My knuckles are white
Around this trigger
Pulled to the head of the person I hate most
Pulled to the part of me that wont let go

She makes my heart stop
My lungs simply collapse when she walks by
How can I say this song isnt for you
When everyone I write is all about you
And im leaving
Leaving you tonight
And im leaving
Leaving you tonight

These words are so easy for me to say
They roll off the tip of my tongue
And I can't make it through another night without the kiss
That heals this
And makes me breathe again
This suffocating is getting old
And I miss the midnights we shared
Holding hands like you really cared

She makes my heart stop
My lungs simply collapse when she walks by
How can I say this song isnt for you
When everyone I write is all about you
And im leaving
Leaving you tonight
And im leaving
Leaving you tonight
Leaving
Leaving
Leaving you tonight
With this suicide letter I wrote for you
All about you

Touched
12/29/03, 07:12 AM
Fairly good and its "queue." :p

mwhpunk
12/29/03, 08:04 AM
some of it reminds me of finch- letters to you

saving face
12/29/03, 09:51 AM
Yeah, Finch are a big influence to my band. infact we're named after our fave song they did. Bands like Finch, The Used, TBS and of course Brand New have a big influence of all the songs i write. But I agree this one is kinda finchy on the Leaving You part.

And as for 'it's queue' Im not sure what they means...lol

Thanks tho

punkpixie
12/29/03, 10:05 AM
I liked it!:D But I like finch so....