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[brandnew_punk_7]

Counting Last Seconds

Ill shoot myself before i let you love me
Convict me in front of faceless people
who on my errors alone are bold to judge me
Conscious of my actions,but unaware of my crimes
And all the times i passed your house
Afraid youd see me passing by

This is the last chance i never had
A waste of non-potential now lays in a tuxedo body bag

Pluck my heart string
Make me bleed and make my feelings sing
Im barely holding on
and now i slip, my grip pryed loose by kerosene
We i say i love you in all the wrong ways
your words a match to set my dripping heart ablaze

You find refreshment in this life that now fades
We go to more funerals;we neglect the living;we love dying things
We nourish life for a short while to watch it bloom then leave it withering
Refine my whining to fit your outline of a song
Repeat the chorus,undermind my words,to make it sound "good"
Parents pay doctors to give us medicine to "make sure we're understood"

Pluck my heart string
Make me bleed and make my feelings sing
Im barely holding on
and now i slip, my grip pryed loose by kerosene
We i say i love you in all the wrong ways
your words a match to set my dripping heart ablaze

[BuriedAlive]

wow, im really impressed. i havent seen a writing like that for a while. damn that was good. its better than most anything i have ever writing.

[FalloutGuy]

Shit that was good. So good I wanna say I wrote it. Awesome lyrics!

[brandnew_punk_7]

i wrote that in about ten minutes on Christmas night of this year...my girlfriend called and said.."well, you know love doesnt change, you dont love someone one day then dont the next" and after telling me she didnt love, just thought she did..well...aint life grand?? "Should i smile because we're friends..or cry because thats all we'll ever be?" "The Worst Part of Love is Loving Someone Who Used to Love You.":dissapoin :dissapoin :dead:

[Touched]

Like the others said, great stuff.

[saving face]

really cool song mate. id say for a writing perspective, cry over ur ex and write some songs, and then smile and write some songs about being friends! lol

its what i do
:cry: :blush: :approve: