the soldier song (i know its been overdone)

[soreloser]

i felt like putting a song together tonight... not too sure if its good or not so u guys help me out.

another life lost in the glory of this fight
we just go on until theres nothing left to give
i want
to be
home with my kids
i need
to see
the hospital..
before i bleed to death

if you get home alive
tell my wife i tried
but couldnt quite make it back
i wish life wasnt so hard
but it is and im gone
and now the end has come

timing wasn't perfect but it never really is
i am being selfish i know why im doing this
to save
the lives
of my friends back home
if i
dont fight
then they will die
and ill be alone

if you get home alive
tell my wife i tried
but couldnt quite make it back
i wish life wasnt so hard
but it is and im gone
and now the end has come

i hate this world, i hate the pain it brings in the vain attempt to survive...
to survive...

if you get home alive
tell my wife i tried
but couldnt quite make it back
i wish life wasnt so hard
but it is and im gone
and now the end has come