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beau blood rush
04/22/08, 04:09 AM
*a song about the confusion of getting back with a girl you love after shits gone down.


Your Sweet Honey, But I Don't Do Sugar

with roses at our fingertips, i'll risk thorns for fingernails
cross her heart and kiss my pen
rip her dress and shed my skin

well i've weathered roads, my friends are foolish to
well stowaways on sinking ships
swam to shore for less than you

i heard romance is dead, so whats that laying in my bed?
kill the chorus and kiss you off
i think that's love
i heard romance is dead, so whats that laying in my bed?
kill the chorus and kiss you off
i think that's love

ever noticed i'm never well? so sell me something beautiful
i'm a flooded lung from an easy eyelid
one love song away from a stitch in my stomach

just like gold fever in the gutter, the rush will get me off the street
i'll go where fools won't follow
cause i own what only i can borrow

i heard romance is dead, so whats that laying in my bed?
kill the chorus and kiss you off
i think that's love
i heard romance is dead, so whats that laying in my bed?
kill the chorus and kiss you off
i think that's love

do you think you could bring yourself to marry me?
if i threw a ring to sea,
hook you on a line and lie down,
theres only one way to find out

i'll be the air you breathe, the wind that sweeps you off your feet
i can read you like no one else, so i'll never put you down
i'll be the air you breathe, the wind that sweeps you off your feet
i can read you like no one else, so i'll never put you down

i heard romance is dead, so whats that laying in my bed?
kill the chorus and kiss you off
i think that's love
i heard romance is dead, so whats that laying in my bed?
kill the chorus and kiss you off
i think that's love

JimGray
04/22/08, 09:28 AM
Yes and no... I hated the chorus, and in all honesty, this left a weird taste in my mouth... but that may be indigestion coupled with an iced honey bun.

billyboatkid
04/22/08, 09:33 AM
Not your best, but not bad.

lew_1987
04/22/08, 09:59 AM
i didn't like this one much at all, sorry.

beau blood rush
04/22/08, 08:59 PM
hmm that's not good news from this side of town

i don't know, we'll write music for it and if it's sounding really good we'll go from ther

thesafeword
04/22/08, 09:16 PM
There.

beau blood rush
04/23/08, 07:53 AM
score.

JimGray
04/23/08, 09:13 AM
Twice.

beau blood rush
04/23/08, 10:08 PM
Snap.

0starter0
04/26/08, 08:49 PM
The chorus needs re-working. But it might be catchy with music.

beau blood rush
04/26/08, 10:53 PM
*this is the updated version, let me know if you think its better

"Your Sweet Honey, But I Don't Do Sugar"

with roses at our fingertips, i'll risk thorns for fingernails
cross her heart and kiss my pen
rip her dress and shed my skin

well i've weathered roads, my friends are foolish to
well stoaways on sinking ships
swam to shore for less than you

hang me like your rosary, your saviour in waiting
well i admit i am salvation, but won't pretend that i can save us
no, turn in little girl
save me from the simple words

ever noticed i'm never well? so sell me something beautiful
i'm a flooded lung from an easy eyelid
one love song away from a stitch in my stomach

just like gold fever in the gutter, the rush will get me off the streets
i'll go where fools won't follow
cause i own what only i can borrow

hang me like your rosary, your saviour in waiting
well i admit i am salvation, but won't pretend that i can save us
no, turn in little girl
save me from the simple words

do you think you could bring yourself to marry me?
if i threw a ring to sea,
hook you on a line and lie down?
do you think you could bring yourself to marry me?
if i threw a ring to sea,
hook you on a line and lie down?

i'll be the air you breathe, the wind that sweeps you off your feet
i can read you like no one else, so i'll never put you down
i'll be the air you breathe, the wind that sweeps you off your feet
i can read you like no one else, so i'll never put you down

hang me like your rosary, your saviour in waiting
well i admit i am salvation, but won't pretend that i can save us
no, turn in little girl
save me from the simple words

thesafeword
04/26/08, 11:51 PM
Well now that it's centered, I love it!

beau blood rush
04/27/08, 05:44 AM
lol smart ass :P its got a new chorus, and a bit of tweaking in other parts, i think il do some more on it but