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saving face
12/30/03, 02:02 PM
Just a little something which i wrote not long ago. its basically about hating someone and them hating you but there is a physcial attraction and the chemistry is just right. and no matter how much you wanna fight the passion, you cant.

Something Beautiful

I look but I can't see
Touch but I can't feel
I gasp but I can't breathe
And I know it's not gonna be long before I leave

Speechless with a stutter
Your lies hold the air between us
As we strain harder
We leak for longer

The satin in which we lie in
And the feathers which we play in
Turn crimson with the passion that unfolds around us
Lungs filled with held in air
Close the gap between seduction and serenity

A virus that holds my body to hostage
Your whims are my command
Smudged mascara
Spinders dwindle down her cheeks and meet the ruby redness of your lips
Girls got a face like murder

I bleed internally as my veins rupture
And shower me with the kisses you plant on me
Such a beautiful act encompasses the sky line
As the moon light flows in and glistens on the shards
Of glass we used to release us from the constraints of monogamy



Any comments would be much appreciated :)

punkpixie
12/30/03, 02:58 PM
Great song. "girls got a face like murder" I like:D

MaybeOneDay
12/30/03, 10:28 PM
Originally posted by punkpixie
Great song. "girls got a face like murder" I like:D

yeah, that line is rad.

i really like it, great job.

popdisaster530
12/31/03, 07:22 AM
Originally posted by saving face
Just a little something which i wrote not long ago. its basically about hating someone and them hating you but there is a physcial attraction and the chemistry is just right. and no matter how much you wanna fight the passion, you cant.

Something Beautiful

I look but I can't see
Touch but I can't feel
I gasp but I can't breathe
And I know it's not gonna be long before I leave

Speechless with a stutter
Your lies hold the air between us
As we strain harder
We leak for longer

The satin in which we lie in
And the feathers which we play in
Turn crimson with the passion that unfolds around us
Lungs filled with held in air
Close the gap between seduction and serenity

A virus that holds my body to hostage
Your whims are my command
Smudged mascara
Spinders dwindle down her cheeks and meet the ruby redness of your lips
Girls got a face like murder

I bleed internally as my veins rupture
And shower me with the kisses you plant on me
Such a beautiful act encompasses the sky line
As the moon light flows in and glistens on the shards
Of glass we used to release us from the constraints of monogamy



Any comments would be much appreciated :)

BAD ASS! best song i've read for a while.

RefusedsXe
12/31/03, 05:57 PM
Pretty good...

"Girls Got A Face Like Murder" is a Fear Before The March of Flames song....

saving face
01/03/04, 08:17 AM
yeah i know! they kick ass!

FalloutGuy
01/03/04, 09:57 AM
Originally posted by popdisaster530
BAD ASS! best song i've read for a while.

pUnkKid174
01/16/04, 03:47 PM
Great song. "girls got a face like murder" I like:D
awesome line...