Fatal Healthiness

[ItalianPlaya42]

Feel free to comment or add criticism if you'd like....
Any bit of help or new ideas would be appreciated.


I shiver when I'm with you
But my blood is boiling to a point
It's never reached and it might be
something not too healthy
Very lovely, send me roses
Along with a card
Signed with your name
And a short note telling me how you are
Today may be the day
I go to sleep and don't wake up
I think I may be falling in love
You're killing me inside
With all of this suspense
You make me sick, but in a good way

[Touched]

It's fairly good, I wasn't so keen on the "It's never reached and it might be, something not too healthy" I didn't like the last bit in that, doesn't really fit for me.