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richter915
01/02/04, 03:39 PM
This is a poem thing...it's just prose...but it's about my gf....post any comments.

In these eyes

In these eyes you possess
Contain only one thing
One thing, which is everything

Man has scoured the planet
Gone to countless wars
All in effort to find this...

This world runs rampant with fools
and eyes full of fools gold
I am the biggest fool, but with the greatest of luck

For I have found an endless mine
Within these eyes
These eyes that you possess

These eyes of yours
They harness gold, joy, strength
and beauty

Beauty which man has never seen
and will never see
All man, except for me.

I see the beauty in these eyes
It is hidden deep within
But it shines through the dark

And it brightens the world
I shield my eyes from the light
and hold my heart close and tight

As this beauty surges through my body
it fills my heart, this dark cavity that beckons
"How can these eyes, release such light?!"

The beauty in these eyes
It blinds me, and encompasses me
As the world reminds blind to it

Something more radiant than the sun
Stronger than the moon's grasp
Louder than the call of Sirens

In these eyes, I find sanctity
I find hope
I find love

All this beauty, eminating from one spot
It fills my heart to the fullest with light
I fear that I cannot take it anymore

but I sacrifice my soul
and my heart
to gaze into these eyes

In these eyes
you carry the single greatest thing to man
True Beauty.

OneThousandTear
01/16/04, 07:19 PM
great poem...the descriptions were excellent!

As this beauty surges through my body
it fills my heart, this dark cavity that beckons
"How can these eyes, release such light?!"

^ ^ ^ ^ ^ my favorite part