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samrozitis
01/02/04, 03:39 PM
just something i was writing... let me know what you think. it's pretty personal so whatevs. enjoi!


as i take one last look at the picture of us, a single tear slides down my cheek. you know i will miss you, yet you still scratch scars through my heart. you will move on, you told me. i know that i dont believe in your lies. i am going to miss looking in your eyes, as you turn your back to me, and leave.

you've let go of my hand, but i still reach out for you. you have had your doubts, but you know i still love you. i cant face the truth, i'll believe in your lies. please take my heart, and this single tear i cry.

you know i wont forget your smile, you were my life, my everything. i want to put the pieces back, but they have all shattered and disappeared. i'm missing you, i'm loving you. and you've left me standing in the rain. but your smell still lingers, and your voice is still heard.

you've let go of my hand, but i still reach out for you. you have had your doubts, but you know i still love you. i cant face the truth, i'll believe in your lies. please take my heart, and this single tear i cry.

i guess that i'll close my eyes, and i'll dream of the past, not long ago. you made life worth living, and for you i'd die, just hold me in your arms just one last time. and watch me cry, just once.

i cry out my fears, i cry out my pain. its all found under glass. this tear i hold, keeps all my mistakes. i'll love you everlast.

you've let go of my hand, but i still reach out for you. you have had your doubts, but you know i will always love you. i cant face the truth, i'll believe in your lies. please take my heart, and this single tear i cry.

you've let go of my hand, but i still reach out for you. you have had your doubts, but you know i still love you. i cant face the truth, i'll believe in your lies. please take my heart, and this single tear i cry.

para ser libre
01/03/04, 01:33 PM
Originally posted by samrozitis
just something i was writing... let me know what you think. it's pretty personal so whatevs. enjoi!


as i take one last look at the picture of us, a single tear slides down my cheek. you know i will miss you, yet you still scratch scars through my heart. you will move on, you told me. i know that i dont believe in your lies. i am going to miss looking in your eyes, as you turn your back to me, and leave.

you've let go of my hand, but i still reach out for you. you have had your doubts, but you know i still love you. i cant face the truth, i'll believe in your lies. please take my heart, and this single tear i cry.

you know i wont forget your smile, you were my life, my everything. i want to put the pieces back, but they have all shattered and disappeared. i'm missing you, i'm loving you. and you've left me standing in the rain. but your smell still lingers, and your voice is still heard.

you've let go of my hand, but i still reach out for you. you have had your doubts, but you know i still love you. i cant face the truth, i'll believe in your lies. please take my heart, and this single tear i cry.

i guess that i'll close my eyes, and i'll dream of the past, not long ago. you made life worth living, and for you i'd die, just hold me in your arms just one last time. and watch me cry, just once.

i cry out my fears, i cry out my pain. its all found under glass. this tear i hold, keeps all my mistakes. i'll love you everlast.

you've let go of my hand, but i still reach out for you. you have had your doubts, but you know i will always love you. i cant face the truth, i'll believe in your lies. please take my heart, and this single tear i cry.

you've let go of my hand, but i still reach out for you. you have had your doubts, but you know i still love you. i cant face the truth, i'll believe in your lies. please take my heart, and this single tear i cry.


i cry out my fears, i cry out my pain. its all found under glass. this tear i hold, keeps all my mistakes. i'll love you everlast.

That was TOO forced, so take it out...

Other than that/...thank you, you write with some decency which is few and far between, i like it...just keep looking to revise it with better words and phrases if they cm to you...but i like it