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rufio242
01/04/04, 09:50 PM
i know that this is in a different post, but i revised it, and added a more suitiple( i can't spell) name.

Ghosts Show No Mercy
I feel as if I'll always be alone,
no one seems to be intrested,
Stuck in the dungeon by myself,
Is the way to make me pay,
For the things I've taken for granet,

No song can make it better,
no book can make me forget,
No words can take the pain,
that is left in me forever,

Im stuck as the middle man,
for everyone else's plans,
Sitting in my room,
listening to music,
is the only attempt to escape,

"No, its ok, it doesnt hurt",
remember that line, (what a joke)
i remember saying that as i watch reach your hand up her shirt,
she gives me the look,
Everytime i hear, "your useless,"
it starts to hurt less,

but it really doesnt bother me anymore,
i've built an immunity,
to the local community,
Just remember,
i was a friend,
now your no friend of mine,
never will I make the same mistake twice,
im stuck alone till the end of time

so with these tears,
i hope you all drowned,
my ghost will be in the boat,
holding anything that floats,
Scraping to kept above the water,
hold you down for a little longer,
remember what you always said,
"I think that your better off dead"

-Hope Is Empty when you have a friend like me-

Im really starting to think,
life life would be better,
if i drained my blood upon this leather,
sitting alone with the sound,
of my heartbeat drowning out my thoughts,
Seems like no one cares,
seems like im alone,

Mom and dad will surely miss me,
i know my family wont forget me,
but its my peers i fear,
my peers that bring me to tears,
"Your worthless, you pathetic,"
All i hope is that this will get your attention,

On second thought,
i dont give a shit about what you thought,
i hope when your gone,
that you still feel that pain as you rot,
I hope my ghost haunts you always,
at the football games and in the hallways,
"Get a look at the outsider,
but what they dont know is i've brought my lighter,

Who needs friends when your got the bottle,
the alcohol keeps the fire buring,
i thought by now someone whould have stoped me,
but i guess not its not about me,

so good-bye world im gonna miss you,
and all the pain that you put me though,
seems to me that this letter is adressed,
who do think will take it best?

Maybe the "friends" that I had,
or maybe to my dear ol' dad,
maybe to the friends i never had,
i think i'll leave it blank,
for all to see what happened,
and a note to all the others after,
make sure your death will happen faster

sorry its really, really long, feedback would be nice, e-mail rufio242@yahoo.com

pUnkKid174
01/16/04, 03:38 PM
i like it...especially the "so good-bye world im gonna miss you...who do think will take it best?" that was great...i'd say to keep writing things like that...i never thought that someone in forums could write that good...

rufio242
01/16/04, 08:04 PM
dude, thanks for that feedback. that really makes me feel good about it. im still working on some songs, but i think total i have about 12. thanks again for the feedback though

pUnkKid174
01/17/04, 08:08 AM
dude, thanks for that feedback. that really makes me feel good about it. im still working on some songs, but i think total i have about 12. thanks again for the feedback though
thanks...is it just me or has this forum been quiet the past week?
hmmmm.....
wow...12...have you showed any of the other ones?

rufio242
01/17/04, 08:20 AM
yeah, i have a few on here, and the rest i have show to a couple people, some need a lot of work though.

pUnkKid174
01/17/04, 08:26 AM
i showed this to a friend and he thought it was really good too...it's sad that noone else has read this and posted something...such a good song...

rufio242
01/17/04, 08:33 AM
no ones been in the forums lately, maybe everyone is into the michael jackson case .

pUnkKid174
01/17/04, 08:46 AM
no ones been in the forums lately, maybe everyone is into the michael jackson case .
lol...made me laugh
michael jackson has been accused of it so much that i dont even want to know anymore...let alone he looks kind of creepy...
nah...i think that the forum people would stay in the forums rather than paying attention to that...lol

rufio242
01/18/04, 10:20 AM
lol, well you never know. he does kinda have the albino ken doll look to them huh?

pUnkKid174
01/18/04, 12:28 PM
lol, well you never know. he does kinda have the albino ken doll look to them huh?
hmmmmm....whats that....

rufio242
01/18/04, 06:30 PM
albino....no pigmet in the skin, its means he is really really white and his nose looks like he is a ken doll that enjoys little childeren

pUnkKid174
01/20/04, 06:32 PM
albino....no pigmet in the skin, its means he is really really white and his nose looks like he is a ken doll that enjoys little childeren
lol....i knew what albino meant but i didnt know that about that ken doll...lol...

rufio242
01/20/04, 09:37 PM
oh, sorry, the ken comment was cause his nose. it looks like a doll nose. but yea, thats what that was about

pUnkKid174
01/22/04, 02:19 PM
oh, sorry, the ken comment was cause his nose. it looks like a doll nose. but yea, thats what that was about
lol....what nose...he doesnt really have one...it's all just remnants of a bone...lol
heh great...