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Chiefgango
05/16/08, 01:19 PM
Ungrateful

Verse 1

Because everyday is like a new-born child
I want an abortion
It's not like you to leave me out
Of your moral distortion
You mutter three words to put me down
But the name suits me
Like you as a fashion accessory
Come make me cool you bitch!

Chorus

You're so ungrateful
Of the life i've given you
You're so ungrateful
Of the days i've spent with you
And i don't think you realise your
Love is like a razorblade
Cut me down the way i want

Verse 2

And i really feel your heart as
I rip it from it's roots
And leave you standing in despair
You've never looked so fucking cute!

Chorus

You're so ungrateful
Of the life i've given you
You're so ungrateful
Of the days i've spent with you
And i don't think you realise your
Love is like a razorblade
Cut me down the way i want

GhostMachine
05/16/08, 01:52 PM
This is horrid. Unimaginative and unoriginal. No real emotion to it and no real flow.

Ashantell
05/16/08, 02:01 PM
I loved the rhymes :D But I wishe there were more versesor whatever u call those :p