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rufio242
01/12/04, 10:17 PM
When you said that i was worthless,
it was forever burned in my mind,
Alone in my room,
light from thunder coming through,
i feel like is ends them all,
(feel like this is the end)

I guess you could say that i'm not the coolest,
if i said that i was you'd tell me prove it,
With the scale working these days,
there is no way that i would fit in,
(not a way for me to get it)
But its hopeless you try,
try to make you mine,
he's with you and your with him,
what if i took care of him?
would you hold it against me
if he disapeared,

Hope that i wont have to do it,
but with what your doing,
your adding fuel to it,
So with with these words,
i hope the pain reminds of the time we had,

the ghost of us,
is all i trust,
don't drive by yourself,
its only for your health,
telling lover boy to watch,
watch for the headlights,
listening for the crash,
smell the burning rubber,
feel as he goes under,
under the dirt and mud,
thats where he belongs,
six feet down


needs alot of work, but feedback on it would make it better. thanks

MaybeOneDay
01/13/04, 04:55 AM
the ghost of us,
is all i trust,
don't drive by yourself,
its only for your health,


That is my favourite part. Good job on this one. I liked it.

para ser libre
01/13/04, 03:06 PM
light from thunder coming through,



Ummm, you do realize light comes from LIGHTning NOT thunder....Right?

rufio242
01/13/04, 03:24 PM
maybe its lightning, and it could be thunder..........but thats for the notice