punkpixie
01/15/04, 11:04 AM
This song is about wanting who you cant have. Old topic?-yes, less painful topic?-no.
Im running out of time
I should have changed my mind
Because im falling like a leaf
Right from a brand new tree
The sound of your smile
Deafening me.
You're always here
But not with me, we'll see
You and someone else
All I've ever wanted (all i've ever needed)
Is just you, and yourself.
Chorus:
Its tearing me down
When you're not around
If you leave me here with my own mind
I won't do anything
(sleep,dream,eat,breathe)
Theres just nothing
Except you and someone else.
When the hairs on your neck stand to attention
Don't expect they'll know a distraction
wait for the cold snap
twice last year
wait till the rain
whispers my name in your ear.
Chorus:
Its tearing me down
when you're not around
If you leave me here with my own mind
I wont do anything
(sleep,dream,eat,breathe)
Theres just nothing
Except you and someone else.
If I carry on this way I am sure to bleed,
I hope you see its you I need.
If I carry on this way I am sure to bleed,
I hope you see it's you I need.
Chorus:
Is tearing me down
When you're not around
If you leave me here with my own mind
I wont do anything
(sleep,dream,eat,breathe)
Theres just nothing
Except you and someone else.
A few comments is all I ask! what could I change,improve etc.... Another persons point of view would be great. :grin:
Im running out of time
I should have changed my mind
Because im falling like a leaf
Right from a brand new tree
The sound of your smile
Deafening me.
You're always here
But not with me, we'll see
You and someone else
All I've ever wanted (all i've ever needed)
Is just you, and yourself.
Chorus:
Its tearing me down
When you're not around
If you leave me here with my own mind
I won't do anything
(sleep,dream,eat,breathe)
Theres just nothing
Except you and someone else.
When the hairs on your neck stand to attention
Don't expect they'll know a distraction
wait for the cold snap
twice last year
wait till the rain
whispers my name in your ear.
Chorus:
Its tearing me down
when you're not around
If you leave me here with my own mind
I wont do anything
(sleep,dream,eat,breathe)
Theres just nothing
Except you and someone else.
If I carry on this way I am sure to bleed,
I hope you see its you I need.
If I carry on this way I am sure to bleed,
I hope you see it's you I need.
Chorus:
Is tearing me down
When you're not around
If you leave me here with my own mind
I wont do anything
(sleep,dream,eat,breathe)
Theres just nothing
Except you and someone else.
A few comments is all I ask! what could I change,improve etc.... Another persons point of view would be great. :grin: