I Miss You (based on the Blink-182 song)

[Emotionless]

" Don't waste your time on me,
My mind is already made up."
She said, then walked out
For good.

I miss you
Give me ONE more try!

I cannot dream,
I cannot think tonight.
I need you always.

I miss you
Give me ONE more try!

As I stared into the akward darkness.
I counted all the good times from the bad,
And they started eating away at my insides
Please come home and stop this pain.

I'm sorry
Give me ONE more try!
I miss you.

[fire182]

I like it. It's loosely based on the song. I see that. But i like it. :D

[em0]

your "poetry" is filled with blink-182 quotes. not to be the dick that busts your bubble but be original. when i read what you post i'm thinking "blink-182 rip off". it can be inspired by their lyrics but that doesnt mean using parts of their songs.

[mps]

wtf?! ur so cheap! thats not a poem! its just fucking plagiarism...write sumthing original!